Score: 1

"You at least have some talent..."

submission: ACTION X 2000

date: October 12, 2009

but this kinda sucks. Honestly, there's no "action" in it. All you can do is walk around.

Score: 10

"May be good, but ONE problem."

submission: Madness: Rising

date: September 25, 2009

The bullet itself does not include the casing, which was depicted here as being white. The primer, which is the part in the back and center of the casing, should've had a pencil-point-sized dent in it, signifying that the gun's firing pin hit it. The bullet, that gray part, would've been the only thing flying out of the gun. It also would've been spinning, as modern guns are always rifled save for shotguns, which fire hundreds of tiny lead balls, commonly referred to as "shot," hence shot-gun.

Score: 10

"BING!!!"

submission: Failed Mugging

date: September 25, 2009

Got any bread?

Hey, give us all your cash, man, or I shank you, eh?

Ahh-Aah-AAH-UUUUUUUUUUUGH-*EX-SPLAT-Z ION!!!*

Score: 9

"A bit better than what you consider your final."

submission: :=>Donkey 9-8 Trance v2.0<=:

date: December 31, 2009

This time, it's a bit on the soft side, and I think that the drums are JUST too soft for the rest of the song, but overall, better than what you've labeled your final version.

Because it's a 9, it gets a 5 vote; that's how I do my voting.

Score: 8

"Overall, I found it good."

submission: :=>Donkey 9-8 Trance Final<=:

date: December 31, 2009

Normally, I'd vote four, but since it's already over four, I don't want to ruin the vote score. The drum sounds make some of the main melody cut out. Now your first 9-8 one, that was a tad better, enough to earn a 10, but it was still short, and a bit on the loud side. If you use FL Studio 8, I would suggest combining the trance with some synth metal. A little goes a long way; the Corneria vs Titania mixes by X-Infinity-Zero, for example, use DIST Metal, I can tell just by the sound of it. It goes along well with the trancey stuff.

Score: 10

"One pattern error, but otherwise very good."

submission: [SP] ~ Elysium+

date: November 4, 2009

In the uptune portion of the main measure, you're a note off. Yeah, other than that, the song is good. Maybe try some FL Slayer or something, a little synth metal goes a long way.